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Enjoying the Weather

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Description

Shot taken of an Inca Tern at the Bronx Zoo.
Image size
1296x972px 225.58 KB
Make
SONY
Model
DSC-H10
Shutter Speed
10/4000 second
Aperture
F/4.4
Focal Length
63 mm
ISO Speed
125
Date Taken
May 1, 2010, 2:12:04 PM
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

This is a really nice photograph. The quality is spot on, the colours are lovely and so is the bokeh. You have isolated the bird very well. The subject is very nice, and the choice of aperture is good. Technically - it is really good. I also like the perspective. It is quite a low angle, which works quite well. The light is also gorgeous, it gives nice color and the shadows on the bird are also lovely.

I have some remarks regarding the composition. It is a shame that you cropped off the end of his tail. I would love, if the bird was positioned more centrally, leaving the head a third from the right. This would work really nicely and it would help the framing. Also on the technical side of things, I can see some very slight, magenta fringing on the top edge of the white rock. This could be easily removed in your editing software.

Lower marks for Vision and Technique, because of the fringe and the composition error.

Overall a fantastic piece of artwork! I love it.

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