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Floral 2

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Shot this at a friends house :)
Image size
979x1306px 340.42 KB
Make
SONY
Model
DSC-H10
Shutter Speed
10/2000 second
Aperture
F/8.0
Focal Length
9 mm
ISO Speed
125
Date Taken
Jul 28, 2010, 1:49:25 PM
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:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Ok, I quite like this scene, because it is really lively. I like the way, the colors are so vibrant, the exposure is nice and bright, the contrast is not too strong, but just right. It is very beautiful and sharp too. However, photography wise, I find it slightly distracting and all over the place. There is nothing that immediately catches my attention - no leading point. I think that possible if you used the leaves on the right as your main subject (they look cool), and closed in slightly closer into them, then probably the image would have been more tidy, and the other flowers, and background would not be as distracting. Maybe also try using a wider aperture, to throw the background slightly more out of focus, because here, things just seem to chaotic.

Lovely scene though. Keep that up.

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